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Caught In Despair

Caught In Despair

is this the final version of the song?
If not I would change the part after the solo. You repeat the "pre Chorus" there but for me it doesn't fit perfect. But the rest is well done!

"So you ask me how it feels to be a stick in the wheel
I tell you honey it feels alright
to be another clog in the wrecking machine
wouldn't even cross my mind"

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Jesus christ this song just made my day.. cant wait to here the audience roar BLACK LIGHTS, DEAD EYES!!! I love this guys! Love the voice too! Awsome!

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fizzy suxx wrote:

is this the final version of the song?
If not I would change the part after the solo. You repeat the "pre Chorus" there but for me it doesn't fit perfect. But the rest is well done!

If I've got this right this is just a song from demosessions to the new album, but I'm not sure.

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it's just a demo, okey so far, but not "jump"... but, but... maybe ready for recording and I hope it get more polishing there, more swing it... i*m waiting for the finalending... and I wanna be surprised. But the lyrics, perfect.

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yeah, more back vocals in the chorus would be nice!

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The bridge between Verse 1 and the Pre-Chorus should be re-edited. It's too abrupt.

these twisted thorns wont go away, an itch like a zit in the crack
bright white teeth shining up the day, yet we're still way off track
>>HERE
avoid dissappointment, expect that you'll lose
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the only thing i dislike in this song.

is that damn cheesy ass lyric "Itch like a zit in the crack"

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the only thing i dislike in this song.

is that damn cheesy ass lyric "Itch like a zit in the crack"

would be cool if you can translate it for me, If asked myself what they want to say with that line

"So you ask me how it feels to be a stick in the wheel
I tell you honey it feels alright
to be another clog in the wrecking machine
wouldn't even cross my mind"

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MrLee wrote:

the only thing i dislike in this song.

is that damn cheesy ass lyric "Itch like a zit in the crack"

would be cool if you can translate it for me, If asked myself what they want to say with that line

a zit, is a spot.

you know, those annoying red things on your skin.

a crack, is like your arse crack.

so its like...the spot is itching in your bum... lmao

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fizzy suxx wrote:

MrLee wrote:

the only thing i dislike in this song.

is that damn cheesy ass lyric "Itch like a zit in the crack"

would be cool if you can translate it for me, If asked myself what they want to say with that line

a zit, is a spot.

you know, those annoying red things on your skin.

a crack, is like your arse crack.

so its like...the spot is itching in your bum... lmao

haha now I know, lol
oh yes this line is really dumb

"So you ask me how it feels to be a stick in the wheel
I tell you honey it feels alright
to be another clog in the wrecking machine
wouldn't even cross my mind"

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Re: Caught In Despair

the new song's awesome fuckin shitt!!!
simon cruz can sing http://www.crashdiet.org/components/com_agora/converter/{SMILIES_PATH}/Fete03.gif
and the riffs are awesome.
hope they will record new shit for all dietheads

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MrLee wrote:

the only thing i dislike in this song.

is that damn cheesy ass lyric "Itch like a zit in the crack"

zit in the crack = "en finne i röven"... swedish people get's it current/tongue

//LONDON

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MrLee wrote:

the only thing i dislike in this song.

is that damn cheesy ass lyric "Itch like a zit in the crack"

zit in the crack = "en finne i röven"... swedish people get's it current/tongue

//LONDON

Hahahahahahaha I get it  current/big_smile

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Larralicious wrote:

Jesus christ this song just made my day.. cant wait to here the audience roar BLACK LIGHTS, DEAD EYES!!! I love this guys! Love the voice too! Awsome!

isnt it black lies...?

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ghghbh wrote:

Larralicious wrote:

Jesus christ this song just made my day.. cant wait to here the audience roar BLACK LIGHTS, DEAD EYES!!! I love this guys! Love the voice too! Awsome!

isnt it black lies...?

it is.

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peterlondon wrote:

MrLee wrote:

the only thing i dislike in this song.

is that damn cheesy ass lyric "Itch like a zit in the crack"

zit in the crack = "en finne i röven"... swedish people get's it current/tongue

//LONDON

I like that line current/smile

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i think this song sounds good! but simon sounds kinda vince neil! anyway the song isn't too bad http://www.crashdiet.org/components/com_agora/converter/{SMILIES_PATH}/Sexe25.gif [color=#FF0080][/color]

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you can really tell that a certain someone has been writing some of the lyrics   http://www.crashdiet.org/components/com_agora/converter/{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_wink.gif   current/lol

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sarah lane wrote:

i think this song sounds good! but simon sounds kinda vince neil! anyway the song isn't too bad http://www.crashdiet.org/components/com_agora/converter/{SMILIES_PATH}/Sexe25.gif [color=#FF0080][/color]

I've kinda known that Simon sounds like Motley Crue singer, Vince Neil! Anyway the song is very cool http://www.crashdiet.org/components/com_agora/converter/{SMILIES_PATH}/PDT_10.gif

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